鱼干罐头 发表于 2024-5-12 10:04   全显示 1楼
作者大大写的蛮不错的啊，已经全都点赞了一遍，但是可能就，缺点新意，没有脱离这类文的常规，男主委曲求全，也没怎么反抗，黄毛太过强势，无坚不摧，女主也是懦弱一直退让，最后的反杀反而有点两边不讨好。
希望下部新书可以加强一下人物描写，增强一下人物的复杂性和层次感，加油!
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